The Weather

I hate the weather at the moment. I love when its all sunny and hot outside. I also love the snow, so if its snow or sun I love it. I really hate the rain! Rain is good once in awhile when you feel like being lazy, but when it rains constantly it gets annoying. I feel like I can't go do anything when it rains. I want summer to come back around. its my favorite season.

Facts About Spirit Bears

• The Kermode or Spirit Bear is a black bear that has white fur due to a rare genetic trait.


• The bear is not albino, as it typically has a brown nose and eyes.


• The greatest concentration of Spirit Bears are found on the Central Coast and North Coast of British Columbia, Canada, but have been documented in northeast British Columbia and as far east in North America as Minnesota.


• The Spirit Bear, like most black bears, weighs about half a pound when born and generally between 150-300 pounds when fully grown.


• The bear’s body length, measured from the tip of the nose to the tip of the tail, averages between four and six feet. Its height, measured from the bottom of the paw flat on the ground to the highest part of the shoulders, is between two-and-a-half and three feet.


• Spirit bears, like most black bears, are omnivores. They eat berries, nuts, fruits, roots, grasses and other plants, insects, deer and moose fawns, carrion and, during the salmon season from late summer through fall, spawning salmon.

Correct These Sentences

1. I went skating down at the pond and three kids from my school were there. We fell down again, and again. We laughed so much out stomachs hurt.
2. I thought the lopsided game would never end. The score just kept getting worse and worse.
3. Martha thinks she is so cool. She is not cool to me.
4. Joe watched a video his mom had bought for him at the store where she worked.
5. Susan loved to watch football. She would watch it every Sunday on T.V. Every Saturday she would go to the local collage football game. She would always wear the school colors.

When I Get Mad

There was this one time when my mom went out of town. She left me and my little brother some money to get pizza. So later that night me and my brother get one large pizza for us, until my boyfriend called. I told him my mom was gone, so him and like 5 of his friends came over. The pizza came and they ate it all! I had one piece of that pizza. I was so mad. I thought it was vary disrespectful, so I went to my room and sat there. All of them came up and apologized to me. They felt so bad that they ended up ordering another pizza for me. Funny thing is that they didn't pay for it. All they did was call Domino's back and say our pizza was burnt, so we got another pizza for free.

Plans For This Weekened.

My plans for the weekend are to hangout with my friends, basically. I do that everyday. But the weekends are the days when everyone doesn't have school, so that means stay out all night and sleep in all day. But the thing that sucks is that this weekend I work on Saturday and Sunday. And one of my friends has to work on Sunday, so that means we can't really hangout on that day. Anyway, my weekend will still be fun even though I have to work.

So Or Because

Anna went to the store because she needed milk.
Chris ate too much candy, so his stomach hurt.
Richard felt tired, so he bought an energy drink.
Telsa ran after the bus because she woke up late.

My own sentences:
Sarah said the music was too quiet, so she turned it up.
Everyone was bored, so we all went to a movie.
Cory fell off his skateboard because he hit a rock.
We were scared to jump off the bridge because it was a long fall.

A Really Scary Moment

There was this one time when me and all of my friends were out spending the night at our tree fort, which was way out in no where. But there was a girl that got killed out there from a cult, so we were all very careful. We had weapons out there, Like 1 gun, an axe, a lot of knives, and machetes. But one night we kept hearing voices and they started getting closer and closer. Than we started seeing a flash light and this was all happening at like 3 in the morning. We could hear them getting closer. So we got a little freaked out and grabbed all our important stuff an darted it through this hay field. We were running forever. Finally we were back to the car. So me and like 9 of my friends went to my house where we felt safe. The funny thing is we went back the next day. Fun times!

Expanded Sentences

The man watched the couple hug each other as he drove by.
The little boy ate all the food so fast that it was gone in 30 seconds.
The girl called it a hambugger not a hamburger.
The two friends pulled a wagon together.
They both broke the game because they were so frustrated.

Favirote Places

My favorite places to be is one the beach because I love the smell, I love the sand, and I really love making fires on the beach an staying out there all night with my friends. After all that, its really nice to go back to a hotel and pop in a couple movies an go to sleep. Another one of my favorite places to be is North Fork. Me an all my friends would pile up in a huge truck and just go up to north fork for the whole day and swim an jump off huge rocks. I love the bridge I jumped off of it before an it was crazy. The feeling of falling was great. I have more places I love to be but those were the ones that came to mind first.

Practice formatting

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Pit Bull Poem

Their instincts override their intelligence.
I wish I had pictures of the naked porcupine.
Tolerating or ignoring discomfort and pain,
The pit bull was put to sleep from getting blind and the infections.
Their instincts override their intelligence.

Sentence Combining

A dog followed mary for half a mile. It stayed very close behind her. She forced herself to stay calm.

A dog followed mary for half a mile and stayed very close behind her the whole time. She forced herself to stay calm.


A dog followed mary for half a mile and stayed very close behind her the whole time, while she forced herself to stay calm.

Why I Think The Drinking Age Should Be Changed

I think the drinking age should be changed to 18 at least. If I could choose I would say drinking should be legal. But I have to think about the real world. But the reason for me thinking the drinking age should be changed to 18 is because that's when you are legal to move out and legal to make your own decisions and to just do things on your own without your parents. And if you get in trouble its all on you not your parents anymore. If your allowed to by cigarettes at the age of 18 you should be able to by alcohol.

What I Think About Our New President.

Well I don't know much about Obama. I never really watched his speeches or with what his plan was for the US. All I know is his name sounds like a killer. From like Iran or something? I don't know much about the election but I hope he doesn't kill the United States.

Some things I know about Colombia

Some things I know about Colombia are that they are constantly at war because they don't know how to get along and work together about their problems. The kids there suffer and have a bad life because there is always fighting surrounding them. So kids start forming gangs to be able to watch out for each other. They are all so depressed with their life they start doing drugs and drinking alcohol because they were raised with too little or too much responsibility.

Peer Editing

Step 1- Compliments

• Start positive and stay positive.
• I really loved your topic.
• I think you used a lot of good details.
• I liked it when you used the word___
• My favirote part was____ because.
• This was really fun to read because.
• I liked the way you___

Step 2- Seggestions

• Be specific and give details.

Step 3- Corrections

• Spelling mistakes.
• Sentence mistakes.
• Punctuation mistakes.

The first club i ever made with friends

Well this year me and my friends wanted to build a treefort. And the reason for that is becuase all my friends didn't have jobs and no places to stay. It was fun we had little parties out there and just all hung out with eachother. It was really kiddish at the age of 18. But we had a great time out there. So the first fort we build was in a tree it was a little small for about 7 people to be staying and sleeping in. It was just a little cramed. So we decided to make a bigger tree fort and this time this tree fort was 3 stories high. We were so high off the ground from bugs and little animals. It was scary to stay the night out there though because there was a cult out there and this girl got murderd out there too. My mom even knew who that girl was. But we all loved our tree fort it was even by a little river so we could go swimming. We moved on from our fort now. We are all starting to get older and a little wiser.

Ideas to tell

1. What was the earliest you ever got up in the morning? The latest you ever stayed up?
2. Did you ever become friends with someone much old than you or younger than you?
3. Describe the club you organized as a kid?
4. If you cought your kids drinking or doing drugs what would you do?
5. Whats the worst punishment your mom can do to you. would you use that on your children?
6. Explain the worst neighbors you ever had.
7. Write a story when someone first broke a bone.
8. Tell about the time you were the happiest you've ever been.
9. Tell about the scariest nightmire you have ever had.
10. A bee that is allergic to honey.