Some things I know about Colombia

Some things I know about Colombia are that they are constantly at war because they don't know how to get along and work together about their problems. The kids there suffer and have a bad life because there is always fighting surrounding them. So kids start forming gangs to be able to watch out for each other. They are all so depressed with their life they start doing drugs and drinking alcohol because they were raised with too little or too much responsibility.

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The first club i ever made with friends

Well this year me and my friends wanted to build a treefort. And the reason for that is becuase all my friends didn't have jobs and no places to stay. It was fun we had little parties out there and just all hung out with eachother. It was really kiddish at the age of 18. But we had a great time out there. So the first fort we build was in a tree it was a little small for about 7 people to be staying and sleeping in. It was just a little cramed. So we decided to make a bigger tree fort and this time this tree fort was 3 stories high. We were so high off the ground from bugs and little animals. It was scary to stay the night out there though because there was a cult out there and this girl got murderd out there too. My mom even knew who that girl was. But we all loved our tree fort it was even by a little river so we could go swimming. We moved on from our fort now. We are all starting to get older and a little wiser.

Ideas to tell

1. What was the earliest you ever got up in the morning? The latest you ever stayed up?
2. Did you ever become friends with someone much old than you or younger than you?
3. Describe the club you organized as a kid?
4. If you cought your kids drinking or doing drugs what would you do?
5. Whats the worst punishment your mom can do to you. would you use that on your children?
6. Explain the worst neighbors you ever had.
7. Write a story when someone first broke a bone.
8. Tell about the time you were the happiest you've ever been.
9. Tell about the scariest nightmire you have ever had.
10. A bee that is allergic to honey.