Wednesday, October 15, 2008
The first club i ever made with friends
Well this year me and my friends wanted to build a treefort. And the reason for that is becuase all my friends didn't have jobs and no places to stay. It was fun we had little parties out there and just all hung out with eachother. It was really kiddish at the age of 18. But we had a great time out there. So the first fort we build was in a tree it was a little small for about 7 people to be staying and sleeping in. It was just a little cramed. So we decided to make a bigger tree fort and this time this tree fort was 3 stories high. We were so high off the ground from bugs and little animals. It was scary to stay the night out there though because there was a cult out there and this girl got murderd out there too. My mom even knew who that girl was. But we all loved our tree fort it was even by a little river so we could go swimming. We moved on from our fort now. We are all starting to get older and a little wiser.
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That is a great story! It sounds like fun even if it seemed like something littler kids would do. I bet you had a great time. When you get a chance, run spellcheck on this. I think it will help you check for little mistakes. If you don't know how, ask me or another student. Great writing! -Rebekah
the tree fort ha ha where is it at
1.I like the subject that your talkin about.A tree house.That's whut's up.
2.Your writing needs some corrections.It needs some commas and puncuations.
3.Well this year me and my friends wanted to build a tree fort.The reason for that is becuase all my friends didn't have jobs and no place to stay. It's fun to have little parties out there and just all hung out with each other. It was really kiddish at the age of 18. But we had a great time out there. So the first fort we build was in a tree.It was a little small for like 7 people to be staying in and sleeping in. It was just a little cramed. So we decided to make a bigger tree fort and this time this tree fort was three stories high. We were so high off the ground from bugs and little animals. It was scary to stay the night out there though because there was a cult out there and this girl got murderd out there. My mom even knew who that girl was. We all loved our tree fort it was even by a little river so we could go swimming. We moved on from our fort now. We are all starting to get older and a little wiser.
this looks good but when u spell cuz u have to spell it all the way out even no I do it all the time but I guess cant in here.
this looks good but when u spell cuz u have to spell it all the way out even no I do it all the time but I guess cant in here lol.....
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